Flow
Cool our first abstract.
This image was taken using the surface flow of a fast moving stream of water. The white currents create the feeling of the action and movement. I think your placement of the largest white current area in the upper right hand corner allows the movement to flow across the image. By allowing the large semi-tranquil area in the bottom half you have enough color from the bed of the creek to come through for added interest, though the color is a bit muddy.
As an abstract it works well but there is no strong graphic element other than the horizontal white current. I wish that the faint curve of the reflection at the bottom left hand corner of the image were more prominent. I like the photograph, but it would have been cool to have a red or gold fall leaf floating in the lower half to add a strong subject.
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December 17th, 2007 at 2:00 am
Nice image but I dont have half a clue how you got said image from the original.
December 17th, 2007 at 2:01 am
Oh and by the way, the original image is quite strong in itself if you could smooth out the subject rock and get rid of the twig in the top-left and the rock in the top-right.