Okevango ……………………………………….The 100th Photograph Submitted
I am told by the photographer that; “The Okevango Delta is a broad river delta that empties into Botswana’s Kalahari Desert, the only river to end in a desert the in the entire world.” How many of you world travelers can say you’ve been there?
Perhaps the photographer will consider a few suggestions. There is a strong reed stem in the center of the image that rises above the horizon and enters the tree line. You may want to clone the tip of this pointer a little shorter. The sky could use a little more saturation. With this type of sky it can be done with as simple a technique as the gradation tool.
I am conflicted on this last suggestion. Is it better to crop out most of the sky or to leave it as a counter balance to the grasslands? I think either one works for me.
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January 8th, 2008 at 12:44 pm
Jim, thanks for your reasoned criticism. I do notice that my version of the photo has a darker sky than the posted one but I agree that it could use more saturation. The wayward reed had bothered me and it would be easy to clone out the top.
The delta can really be appreciated from the air; one can fly for an hour in a small plane and see nothing but islands and water until it all ends shortly before touch-down in the city of Maun.
January 8th, 2008 at 1:39 pm
How did you come to be in this part of the world?
January 8th, 2008 at 4:44 pm
My wife is a travel agent and puts together groups of our friends for interesting trips. We usually have 10-20 people, on each trip and there is a core group of regulars who go on every one. I joke that I don’t have to send postcards or emails to people if they are with me. There’s always at least 2-3 serious photographers in the group. Since starting the trips in 1998, we have seen three total eclipses of the sun, the last one in 2006 in Libya, journeyed to Kenya and Tanzania, Italy, Holland, Belgium, South America, and Antarctica, to name a few. This year we’re going to Japan, New Zealand and Australia.
January 8th, 2008 at 5:39 pm
Wow !