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Critiquing, judging and Scoring of Photographs

Posted by JL Morris on January 25, 2008

Shopping Girl

Posted under Color, Critiqued, Portrait

Shopping GirlEnvironmental portraits are generally meant to tell us something about our subject and well as capture their likeness.  If your subject is a pianist you would most likely photograph them sitting at their piano or in some way surrounded by music.  If they were an astronaut your most likely would not picture them at a base ball game.  There are reasons you would break the rules but the important point is that you want to tell a story about the subject.

This image of the mannequin tells her story in an indirect way.  Because of who (what) the subject is we automatically assume the out of focus background is some sort of store or shopping mall.  At first glance you might think she is moving through the scene.  The placement of the head off to the side allows us to see beyond her into the environment.

Perhaps the color or contrast could be altered to give her face a little less gray tone.  She does not look alive, what am I talking about she is not alive.  I wish the photographer could have gotten a little more detail and less black into the surroundings.  Also note the dark shadow under the chin.  It may have been caused by an on camera flash or just bad existing lighting.  At least you won’t get red eye with this model.

By the way I hope my wife doesn’t come home in this get up.

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4 Responses to “Shopping Girl”

  1. I like the subject but find the bright spot to the left of the subject distracting. Maybe when adjusting the photo in PS you could tone down these areas.

  2. Jim, thank you for the critique. The hallway in this shopping area was dark. The shadow under the chin was from the flash. Without any other light sources available, the only other option would have been to us a lower angel. This would have caused to have more of the ceiling in the photo, but I wanted the blurred hallway as the background. I also have version with a warmer tone, but photos with warm tones get more often rejected at stock photography website. This was the goal behind this shot.

  3. Hi Roy, I too don’t like the bright spot. I tried a little to tone it down, but whatever I tried I ended up noticing the manipulation. I should have moved the mannequin, but I was not quite brave enough to go into the store and ask for permission.

  4. It is my feeling that photographers continually fail to look at the background that might be filled with bright, eye catching, spots. If you were to turn the image upside down, the bright spot would hit you in the eye. That is why the old 4×5 camera was good, because you had to look at the image that way. Try it in your computer.See how much more the spot catches your attention.

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