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Posted by JL Morris on August 2, 2008

Black&White

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Black&WhiteThe next step beyond low-key is lithograph; where there is only black and white with no gray tones present.  That is to say that some photographs can be made to look like an India ink drawing. 

This photograph fits the title Black & White.  Through the clever use of light reflection this photo-artist has created a stunning graphic that pops off the page (screen).  The composition consists of bisecting the horizontal with white on the left and black on the right.  These contrasts are reversed in the water and glass reflections.  The vertical is divided in half by the line of glass rims.  The photographer has carefully thought out this composition.

You may notice that the right hand glass appears to be leaning toward the edge of the frame.  I have checked this out using a vertical line and it is as truly straight as any of the other subjects.  It is only an optical illusion cause by the proportion of black to white in the water making your eye see it more heavily weighted on the right side.

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Black&White

Posted by JL Morris on July 7, 2008

The Candle

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The CandleAltering photographs so that they consist of a black and white with an accent of color is a technique that has been around since the beginning photography.  Before we were able to reproduce color in photographs images would be hand tinted to give them realism.  Since the advent of color prints it has become more of a novelty technique.  Today it can be accomplished on the computer using selective masks.

The scene in this illustration lends itself the selective coloring.  The interior of this building indicates a time long past.  It was a natural choice to leave the candle in color to indicate the present imposed onto the past.   I like the way the door is cropped allowing us to see only a portion of the opening.

There are a couple comments I would like to make.  For some reason the candle seams to low in the composition.  I can’t put my finger on just why but I feel it needs to be further away from the bottom of the frame.  Speaking of edge relationships, perhaps the hanging pot on the right could have a little more distance for the side.

I would also like to see more contrast in the black and white print.  The grays are a little muddy and some work with the levels and curves would give the image a little more snap.

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The Candle    Modified The Candle - Modified

Posted by JL Morris on June 25, 2008

1800’s

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1800'sWhen I look back at products made a hundred years ago I am amazed at the artistic detail that went into some of the most common items; filigree and scroll work on industrial machines, masonry sculptures on buildings high above the street, flowing design of utilitarian products.  This was the industrial age, why go to such trouble to make commercial products with such artistic detail?  It must be our need to create art and craftsmanship even in the tools we use every day.

This nineteenth century device, I don’t know what it is perhaps a coffee grinder, shows this attention to detail in the spokes of the wheel.  They could have just used straight lines but rather the manufacturer elected to produce interlocking arks reminiscent of a fine crafted geometric sculpture.

The photographer has framed the subject in such a way that we only see three quarters of the object.  We can tell that it is symmetrical so there is no need to illustrate it in its entirety.  This leaves something to the viewer’s imagination.  The back drop, the lace curtains, gives the feeling of a Victorian home.

The image has been altered with a soft focus filter along the top of the subject to give it a dreamy effect.  This is nice but may not have been necessary to this extent. 

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Posted by JL Morris on May 30, 2008

Scent of a Hotel

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Scent of a HotelMood is less specific than emotion.  It is a feeling, good or bad, that we take away from a situation or a scene.  Images often evoke moods in the viewer which may be felt more intensely by some than others.  The lighting in a photograph combined with the subject matter set the tone of some compositions in a way that asks the viewer to intemperate the story being presented.  Emotions evoke feeling of anger, joy, love, patriotism, etc., but a mood is a subtle tone that covers a broader more indefinable feelings.

This image presented is a mundane scene that we have all experienced, the hotel room, nothing to photograph there, nothing extraordinary, it’s just a hotel room.  But the photographer has turned it into a work of art that the viewer can read like a good novel, and each reader will come away with a different story.  The original photograph has been manipulated in a subtle way to give the illustration a dream like quality while at the same time not distorting the presentation of the subject.  Using a green hue, which is normally not a good thing, adds a mood to the image that is difficult to express, a little sad and yet familiar.  It also adds a certain timeless quality to the composition. 

By showing the wall to the left with the picture in forced perspective the photo-artist has added death to the image.  This combined with the bed on the right focus our attention on the one point perspective of the light and then on what it illuminates.  This ordinary hotel room is telling a narrative that is somewhere between a mystery and a suspense.  It draws you in and holds your attention while you find you are trying to complete the rest of the story.

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Scent of a Hotel

Posted by JL Morris on April 17, 2008

Sign of the Times

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Sign of the TimesIsolating our subject and finding interesting detail within that subject is one way of making a creative photograph.  Two photographers will look at the same scene and walk away with entirely different images.  This is because the more creative you are the more you define the world around you in your own style.  That is to say, a photographer’s style is taking a subject making it their own.

This photograph of abandoned signs has the look and feel of a gritty detective story.  The lighting, coming from an off camera location, is dramatic, leaving long distinct shadows as it skims over the surface of the subject.  The angle of the sign with a second message board behind it heightens the tension and mystery to the composition. 

There are pure whites with stark blacks and every shade of gray in between giving this image a strong scene of mood.  I take away the feeling of a lonely night, a time of quiet with a hint of danger in the shadows.

This is an image I would frame and hang on my wall.

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Sign of the Times

Posted by JL Morris on April 15, 2008

Death Valley Ghost

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Death Valley GhostThe ghost town of Rhyolite has ghosts.  It is the only ghost town I know of where photographers can capture ghosts with their cameras.  These phantoms of the desert, about a half dozen as I recall, are the work of a sculptor whose name is unknown to me.  They have been there for at least twenty five years and thou they appear to be fragile they have not been damaged by the visiting public.

This unearthly image has accomplished something that is more difficult than it looks.  Photographing someone else’s work of art and making it your own.  This was done by shooting the subject head on without any frills but doing it in such a way that it appears to be deliberant and conceived by the photographer.

The use of a sepia filter, on camera or computer, adds a little more mystery to the scene.  For some reason the unusually shaped dark cloud over the sector’s head adds a malignant element as if there was a sprite being behind this inanimate object.

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Death Valley Ghost

Posted by JL Morris on January 4, 2008

Silver Man

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Silver ManBoy you have thrown me a curve ball here.  This one is over the top.  I pride myself on liking the unique and this one is definitely unique.

Constantly, I say when you take a photograph of someone else’s art you have to interpret it and make it your own.  It appears you photographed this sculpture; it is a sculpture isn’t it, and then applied a computer filter to convert it to your own imagination.  You have turned this subject into an ice sculpture.  It’s fun to play with filters and see what you get.

When I see this image it appears that the filtration was overdone.  Perhaps you could have selected the subject and filter that as you have done and left the background the original color.  As it is now the background adds a lot of confusion to the scene.  Or perhaps you could have dropped in an entirely different background.

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Posted by JL Morris on December 13, 2007

Memory in Her Hands

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Memory in Her HandsWhat a touching concept.  This tells the story of those left behind with unfinished promises and memories of what might have been.  Without words a whole story is expressed in a few shades of black and white.

The use of window light has accentuated the texture of the subject’s hands.  The way her fingers are framing the photograph with such care shows love for the young soldier in the portrait.  Of particular interest is the way you cropped the photo along two corners makes it just that much more important to the story.

In a set up still life the photographer is responsible for every detail.  There are two things I would recommend.  The ring on her right hand appears to have rotated around her finger.  The image may have been even more powerful if there were only one ring on her wedding finger.  If you had complete control of the setup you might have placed a white reflector card just off to the left to reduce some of the rim shadow from her hands on the portrait.

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